Sometimes a poet has to ponder upon:
substitutes
suspense
building
breaking
glueing
grooving
gazzillion
broken pieces
put back together
Love
Heart
Rhythm
pace of words
Rhythm !
Shall words be beautiful ?
Or aggressive ?
For some opponent heavy readers Lovely words just don't suffice!
***Love words, cheesy romanticism and odes to beauty
turn out to be:***
too easy
too light
not a delight
a psyche's cry is heard:
"Where is some drama!? For God's sake!!!"
We hear annoyed reader's comments...
**"Brother, this cheesy woobadaloo, smoochy kind of poetry ain't nothing but pure ****
An effort compared to one, two three, slight steps in muddy warm water
nothing much to do, a lurking pudding, fibble will... oh, my my
oooooohh"
no harm done
but boring
but! - there's always a - but!
some badass poetic freak
with it's head in
the clouds
tell me about Love
dear!
till
the day's tiles
are done.
***"Where's some culmination!!?!!
Crime, anger, passion!!!?!!!
Terriffic twists of turmoil, sweat, deceit... !??!
At least a bit of dark matter puked on a silver platter!! Where is this abruptly amazing, abolishing lust for hedonism!!!?"***
fortune
torture
pain
lust
give me some more!
blood, thorns
screams,
tears
sweet ****
Does beauty suffice!?!
Without duality?!
Is there a Real Poetry without
Suffering ?
Tell me poets!!
Is there a Poetry- Divine without ugliness ?!? of words, energy, meanings without a constant fight!?
inner dialogue
characters
opposition
HAIKU!?!
Feb 9, 2015
Feb 9, 2015 at 11:10 AM UTC
Sometimes a poet has to ponder upon:
substitutes
suspense
building
breaking
glueing
grooving
gazzillion
broken pieces
put back together
Love
Heart
Rhythm
pace of words
Rhythm !
Shall words be beautiful ?
Or aggressive ?
For some opponent heavy readers Lovely words just don't suffice!
***Love words, cheesy romanticism and odes to beauty
turn out to be:***
too easy
too light
not a delight
a psyche's cry is heard:
"Where is some drama!? For God's sake!!!"
We hear annoyed reader's comments...
**"Brother, this cheesy woobadaloo, smoochy kind of poetry ain't nothing but pure ****
An effort compared to one, two three, slight steps in muddy warm water
nothing much to do, a lurking pudding, fibble will... oh, my my
oooooohh"
no harm done
but boring
but! - there's always a - but!
some badass poetic freak
with it's head in
the clouds
tell me about Love
dear!
till
the day's tiles
are done.
***"Where's some culmination!!?!!
Crime, anger, passion!!!?!!!
Terriffic twists of turmoil, sweat, deceit... !??!
At least a bit of dark matter puked on a silver platter!! Where is this abruptly amazing, abolishing lust for hedonism!!!?"***
fortune
torture
pain
lust
give me some more!
blood, thorns
screams,
tears
sweet ****
Does beauty suffice!?!
Without duality?!
Is there a Real Poetry without
Suffering ?
Tell me poets!!
Is there a Poetry- Divine without ugliness ?!? of words, energy, meanings without a constant fight!?
inner dialogue
characters
opposition
HAIKU!?!
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