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*feathers or snowflakes nighttime, unimportantly, cannot differentiate on the 16th floor balcony each an individualized n-vite fall downy into down of snow blankets of freezing releasing cold comfort, ice cream for the body entire oh yes, a sad one penned, the nullity of his throbbing everything, sore tempted for quenching by the soft permanence of white, most tempting, soft offering a laundering downy state they say see the good stuff do, but I*  feel  *the bad stuff with heartbeat regularity, temple pounding repetitive asking what's the next best and other naming questions the way in is not way out... this hole I dug dark, no hand holds, dank, elongated this time happy you, brevity suits for the downy fall fleeting floating abrupt and suggesting wonderfully right-sided answers to questions his names asks where is the humble path, where is shelter at long last..*.
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Jan 31, 2015
Jan 31, 2015 at 10:06 AM UTC
The Falling Downy (The Nightime Balcony)
*feathers or snowflakes nighttime, unimportantly, cannot differentiate on the 16th floor balcony each an individualized n-vite fall downy into down of snow blankets of freezing releasing cold comfort, ice cream for the body entire oh yes, a sad one penned, the nullity of his throbbing everything, sore tempted for quenching by the soft permanence of white, most tempting, soft offering a laundering downy state they say see the good stuff do, but I*  feel  *the bad stuff with heartbeat regularity, temple pounding repetitive asking what's the next best and other naming questions the way in is not way out... this hole I dug dark, no hand holds, dank, elongated this time happy you, brevity suits for the downy fall fleeting floating abrupt and suggesting wonderfully right-sided answers to questions his names asks where is the humble path, where is shelter at long last..*.
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Jan 31, 2015
Jan 31, 2015 at 10:06 AM UTC
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