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I am hollow and afraid I wonder - do they see my pain? I hear echoes of the rain       the downpour inside my brain I see the drops falling down I want to stop them, but I am hollow and afraid I pretend I am fine, but I feel very far from fine I run my fingers through my hair I fear judgement, everywhere I cry inside, but only there, for I am hollow and afraid I know they say "life is a wonder" I say life is a four-letter word I dream of death, desolation, disaster I just want it all to end, because I am so hollow and so afraid
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Jan 30, 2015
Jan 30, 2015 at 10:09 PM UTC
No Title (Jill's Poem)
I am hollow and afraid I wonder - do they see my pain? I hear echoes of the rain       the downpour inside my brain I see the drops falling down I want to stop them, but I am hollow and afraid I pretend I am fine, but I feel very far from fine I run my fingers through my hair I fear judgement, everywhere I cry inside, but only there, for I am hollow and afraid I know they say "life is a wonder" I say life is a four-letter word I dream of death, desolation, disaster I just want it all to end, because I am so hollow and so afraid
This is not my poem, I know this girl named Jill and she is cute, she is awesome and she understands, but she had to write a poem for school. If there is one thing that I do not like about schools is they force you to write, she clearly poured her soul out in this one. I love it! It is scary good! What do you think?
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Jan 30, 2015
Jan 30, 2015 at 10:09 PM UTC
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