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Supernal abodes ours where we be as soul-sheaths more transparent than we aspire *in abodes we of self-modification more transparent than we petaled hope* of here, realms where bloom delights, beacons of petaled hope, amid the rhythms of ice-pins *amid Supernal beacons of delights space, sensation soul-sheaths expansion of ice-pins* in expansion space, sensation light and self-modification all perception *be as bloom ours where all perception here, realms where aspire light and the rhythms*
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Jan 19, 2015
Jan 19, 2015 at 2:14 PM UTC
Supernal | Surreal Picture-poem
Supernal abodes ours where we be as soul-sheaths more transparent than we aspire *in abodes we of self-modification more transparent than we petaled hope* of here, realms where bloom delights, beacons of petaled hope, amid the rhythms of ice-pins *amid Supernal beacons of delights space, sensation soul-sheaths expansion of ice-pins* in expansion space, sensation light and self-modification all perception *be as bloom ours where all perception here, realms where aspire light and the rhythms*
Noting a vision in word, juxtaposing couplets in Iambic pentameter, with those created using my interpretation of Surrealist Cut-up. Surrealists have been concerned with the sub-conscious..time to unleash also supra- or super-conscious...last has not been said yet...!
prabhu-iyer
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Jan 19, 2015
Jan 19, 2015 at 2:14 PM UTC
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