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you smell like water boiling with maybe a teaspoon of salt in it. like safety, like a prelude to food, like the reason everyone gathers in a kitchen during a party, like home. which is cliche and sappy and ultimately true. my least favorite poems tend to talk about how cliche they are and how it's true anyway. it's true I don't know another way to say this. not yet. i think i'll learn. there are constellations that you can only see from the other side of the world, that i've never seen. the southern cross, phoenix, carina. constellations I've seen over and over again. orion, cygnus, the pleiades. I've never seen them in your eyes. I'll never see them in your eyes. There are still a whole universe of stars behind them.
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Jan 4, 2015
Jan 4, 2015 at 10:45 PM UTC
and then the joke came true
you smell like water boiling with maybe a teaspoon of salt in it. like safety, like a prelude to food, like the reason everyone gathers in a kitchen during a party, like home. which is cliche and sappy and ultimately true. my least favorite poems tend to talk about how cliche they are and how it's true anyway. it's true I don't know another way to say this. not yet. i think i'll learn. there are constellations that you can only see from the other side of the world, that i've never seen. the southern cross, phoenix, carina. constellations I've seen over and over again. orion, cygnus, the pleiades. I've never seen them in your eyes. I'll never see them in your eyes. There are still a whole universe of stars behind them.
this is really sappy. comments welcome. I'm working on the title and this may be finessed further.
lucy-crozier
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Jan 4, 2015
Jan 4, 2015 at 10:45 PM UTC
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