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Your words are quite confusing Your phrases are too contradicting Your thoughts are too well hidden your… I just don’t know what you mean Why is it that you make things difficult Why is it that you are [replace: ‘need to be’] so vague Why must you hide those [replace: ‘such’] things from me Why is it that what makes little sense is all you only say          What I need to hear … {illegible} …. what makes little sense I can’t understand. My mind no longer works My heart can’t stand this confusion much longer I must know what you want me to be… anarchy I must [ want to] know what you think I need to know your guidance (your wants, your aspirations) I need to know your wants I need to tell you how much you matter, how much I care But it’s a catch-22, (you see) I don’t know what to ask [say] There are (too) few words I can use To say what you mean [ quite what I feel] “I love you” is much, much too trite “You are my world” is just not enough So I guess (this Valentine’s) I’ll (just have to) ask…   “Will you be mine?” -- Once Redacted Replaced [with] (Added)
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Dec 29, 2014
Dec 29, 2014 at 10:29 PM UTC
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Your words are quite confusing Your phrases are too contradicting Your thoughts are too well hidden your… I just don’t know what you mean Why is it that you make things difficult Why is it that you are [replace: ‘need to be’] so vague Why must you hide those [replace: ‘such’] things from me Why is it that what makes little sense is all you only say          What I need to hear … {illegible} …. what makes little sense I can’t understand. My mind no longer works My heart can’t stand this confusion much longer I must know what you want me to be… anarchy I must [ want to] know what you think I need to know your guidance (your wants, your aspirations) I need to know your wants I need to tell you how much you matter, how much I care But it’s a catch-22, (you see) I don’t know what to ask [say] There are (too) few words I can use To say what you mean [ quite what I feel] “I love you” is much, much too trite “You are my world” is just not enough So I guess (this Valentine’s) I’ll (just have to) ask…   “Will you be mine?” -- Once Redacted Replaced [with] (Added)
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Nike-Kaffezakis
American
Dec 29, 2014
Dec 29, 2014 at 10:29 PM UTC
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