Okay, you try it,
to bring a superlative
upon a regular you
and
using a minimal
amount of
foreign words!
Let me show you
how hard it gets,
with a light exercise!
Here we go:
stitch
in red
a ribbon
hearted like
paint
an island
around it
get inside the draw
play with the pebbles
built a castle
and pretend
you're a troubadour
no one will know
Dec 28, 2014
Dec 28, 2014 at 6:19 PM UTC
Okay, you try it,
to bring a superlative
upon a regular you
and
using a minimal
amount of
foreign words!
Let me show you
how hard it gets,
with a light exercise!
Here we go:
stitch
in red
a ribbon
hearted like
paint
an island
around it
get inside the draw
play with the pebbles
built a castle
and pretend
you're a troubadour
no one will know
*"Let's Do A Line!" (Frank Ruland's Challenge)
28.12.2104
~~~
1) FD
2) Identity Infinitely Magnified
3) "the you-est you"
4) I really liked the word formation; plus, the subject of identity is presented in a mind stirring way.
Find the poet here: http://hellopoetry.com/fd/
