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your eyes are deeper than any poetry i've ever read. i've tried to write them in six-word poems but it can never quite capture their depth. i've tried rhymes and sonnets and haikus but i end up dreaming of them instead. i'm lying on the roof looking at the stars in the skies and wish i were looking at the ones in your eyes.
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Dec 20, 2014
Dec 20, 2014 at 9:56 PM UTC
you know you'll spin out of control when your world rotates on those brown eyes
your eyes are deeper than any poetry i've ever read. i've tried to write them in six-word poems but it can never quite capture their depth. i've tried rhymes and sonnets and haikus but i end up dreaming of them instead. i'm lying on the roof looking at the stars in the skies and wish i were looking at the ones in your eyes.
kaye
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Dec 20, 2014
Dec 20, 2014 at 9:56 PM UTC
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