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Crossing beside a gravestone path as the sky closes in Foot falls meet with deaf ears and the clouds open up Looking over the regrown grass Where the rain came down Where I know youd be looking back In the fog we drown You never told me and now its too late you werent the only victim why couldnt you wait? Open to me, we could both breathe You breathe through me please speak wholly! Open to me! Please dont fool me! Don't undo me You have to speak Now, speak through me Open to me! A path between old headstones A suffering you didnt know! If tears furnish the weeds On the trail growing Better than the water from you to me the path outlined To your souless tomb will grow stronger Please make room! Open to me, we could both breathe You breathe through me please speak wholly! Open to me! Please dont fool me! Don't undo me You have to speak Now, speak through me Open to me!
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Dec 19, 2014
Dec 19, 2014 at 1:36 PM UTC
Open to Me
Crossing beside a gravestone path as the sky closes in Foot falls meet with deaf ears and the clouds open up Looking over the regrown grass Where the rain came down Where I know youd be looking back In the fog we drown You never told me and now its too late you werent the only victim why couldnt you wait? Open to me, we could both breathe You breathe through me please speak wholly! Open to me! Please dont fool me! Don't undo me You have to speak Now, speak through me Open to me! A path between old headstones A suffering you didnt know! If tears furnish the weeds On the trail growing Better than the water from you to me the path outlined To your souless tomb will grow stronger Please make room! Open to me, we could both breathe You breathe through me please speak wholly! Open to me! Please dont fool me! Don't undo me You have to speak Now, speak through me Open to me!
My best friend and I wrote this song. It's about a really good friend I had who killed themselves a couple months back. I didn't know about it till the day of the funeral.
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Dec 19, 2014
Dec 19, 2014 at 1:36 PM UTC
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