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The Artist

He walks through a wood once every month

He takes the same route near The Wishing Pond

 

He meets with the Collector in a secluded building

Who never fails to purchase every new painting

 

The man was an artist, the Collector was a fan

His works and his reputation was known throughout the land

 

The Artist had it all: a nice house, a loving wife,

friends in every town and city, and wealth to last his life

 

Every month, another painting

Every month, the Collector's money

 

His life was set, his life was perfect

All he needed as an artist was a self portrait

 

So this next month's painting would be special

For when he would pass, this will be his memorial

 

He started on an early morning, standing in front of a mirror

With skill and patience, shading and texture, the first sketch was done

 

The painting process took a few days

Without sleep or food, for hours in his room he stayed

 

Near the end of the month, the portrait finally done

Proud and exhausted, the artist exclaimed, "This is a special one."

 

The next day, he readied his portrait to take

To the Collector, who was expecting to be amazed

 

With a glance at the picture before he could leave

He noticed many flaws and said, "I want a perfect me"

 

He sent a letter explaining the delay

To the Collector, disappointed, he lessened the pay

 

For days, the Artist fixed each flaw

The big ears, the small nose, the feminine jaw

 

Every day he found a new imperfection

But after months and months of fixing, he achieved satisfaction

 

He took his self portrait on his once monthly walk

To the Collector's house, pass The Wishing Pond

 

He tripped on a rock, dropping his portrait

Falling into the pond, his art was ruined

 

The canvas had sunk, the water grew murky

The paint spread around and clouded before him

 

The cloudy colors swirled in the water's waves

The Artist, distraught, sat in heartache

 

A figure rose from the water, the colors had faded

He recognized it immediately as the perfection he painted

 

His portrait was alive for to not be was imperfect

His creation looked back at him and exclaimed, "I am The Artist"

 

Throughout the years, the portrait had adopted The Artist's life

With perfect skills, perfect fame, and even the love of his wife

 

The Collector, impressed by its own work, gave it double the pay

He also terminated his contract, he and the Artist had made

 

The Artist was left with nothing

His life stolen by his painting

 

Embodied perfection had taken it all

Living wishful thinking, alive from The Pond

 

He tasked, and pushed, and berated himself to achieve perfection

He succeeded, but lost everything to his perfect version.

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daniel-christopher-chavez
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Feb 28, 2011
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