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A desperate plea

by obscurity-thought

Writhing with anxiety, He hesitantly walked ahead, He equivocally looked beyond his nose, Whimpers of tired sobs, Followed him to the door, ‘Please, please,’ her tired voice begged, ‘Do everything you can’ Everything I have done thus far, He thought, Is the best I can, But still, He never blocked the ray of hope, In her path of darkness, As he moved to and fro, Time flew by fast, Any glimpse of a break through, Uneventfully shut in his face, With nowhere to turn, He remembered gentle words seldom heard, As in entranced, he listened carefully, Guilt of sins past imbued him, But strutted on with faith, He desperately made his plea, ‘If you will do just this one thing for me, I promise…’ But now, Everything is back to ‘normal’, The desperate times past, Promises made broken, again.
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Published
Dec 15, 2014
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2m
Notes

Many of us often turn to God and pray fervently when we have problems. This poem was inspired by a friend who made a desperate prayer when he had a serious errand to run for his wife. He had made the prayer a day before but as he spoke to us, he openly said he never remembered any single word he uttered in that desperate time.

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#prayer#god#religion#hope#faith
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