ALL OPINIONS APPRECIATED AND FEEDBACK IS VERY VERY WELCOME
especially since I'm entering this for a chance to win classes taught by an actual college professor about poETRY EEP I WOULD LOVE TO BE ABLE TO LEARN IN THIS CLASS.
if this poem is not worthy, then please please tell me, or tell me how to make it better, or even if I should pick a different poem all together.
this class/audition is only for high schoolers, and I'm 14 by the way.
thanks fellow poets, and have a creative day !