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Threadbare

*We live another complication everyday, Adding another thread to bind us.* It's been so long... Can't move my wings, my limbs-- How did I get stuck? Did I do this to myself? The puppeteer is pulling too hard! I want to move, But I can't I'm twisted up, The thread is too tight; I can feel the dread of suffocation on the horizon. I'm trying, I'm *fighting, I want to be free!* But I can't move anymore... The thread won't let me, The strings are being pulled too tight-- *My prison, it cuts into my skin,* I can barely breathe enough to live on... I want this suffering to end! Aah! Yes... I remember now, I took the thread of my own free will! It started that day... When I heard them speak, *I did as they asked, And the thread wound around me.* I didn't ask for answers and didn't speak of my questions; I kept on going where their path lead, And I ended up here: *Suffocated, stranded, in naïve ignorance.* *Even though the puppeteer wants me to move, Even though I can feel his anxiety to help; He can't do a thing.* The thread has been wound too tight, ***If the thread won't snap soon, I will.***
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shruti-atri
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Nov 24, 2014
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Inspired by the dialogue: "I wear the chain I forged in life," replied the Ghost. "I made it link by link, and yard by yard; I girded it on of my own free-will, and of my own free-will I wore it. Is its pattern strange to you?" - from A Christmas Carol, by Charles Dickens.

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