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Valentine 8

i haven't been much good at rhyming

i know it's all about the timing

and i never can seem to get that right

but here i am, just trying in spite

...of it all...

uhg...

see, that's what i mean

i can't seem to keep a good rhyming scheme

try as i may and try as i might

i can't always get the words i want right

but here i am, i'm on a roll

so let me try to express how i ... feel?

no, ****** that's not even close

let me try again...

but here i am, i'm on a roll

i hope this poem doesn't take its toll

on our relationship, or anything

i'm just trying to say what i mean

and write a cute rhyming poem for you

but i can tell it sounds like poo.

hah! that was a joke! oh wait...

maybe the word "poo" is't appropriate

for a valentine's day poem, you see

so now i should just...

 

ok this is ridiculous, i'm done with the rhyming.

but here was my try at a rhyming poem.

it ******

but i can't seem to even begin to write something that rhymes without it sounding cheezy and stupid anyway.

oh well, i tried.

 

uhh, I love you!

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Feb 14, 2011
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