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Contemplation (Tanka)

by prabhu-iyer

How shall I hymn you, majestic presence? Shall I be the wide sea, and weep, overcome in your vastness? or, evaporate, seeking you?
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prabhu-iyer
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prabhu-iyer
Indian
Published
Nov 21, 2014
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1m
Notes

1. This is written in the style of Japanese tanka – my first attempt at that, all you experts, guide me if I’ve got something wrong there!

2. The origins of ‘contemplate’ are rooted in meditation on the sky!

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#sea#presence#tanka#seek#vast#majesty
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