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Trees and windows

Staring through a window at branches against the white sky. Like tributaries of a river, the trees life flows like water. Stare long enough the windows begin to shake and blur. Everthing gets distorted. Besides the branches, the tributaries, the water that flows from it and the water that falls from it. Focal point of vision unaffected, the details that surround hazy, unclear. Close ones eyes to see that veins of the eye and branches of the tree go together intermittenly.
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derek-m
American
Published
Feb 5, 2011
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Please send feed back, negative and positive, this is my first attempt at poetry and would like to know how it reads to others.

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