You know growing at one point in life we loved our childhood but now my life is even better now that i have you. you make it so much better girl i just wanna make you happy and now im free, free falling yeah free fallin you have me feeling like im on cloud 9 let be there for you girl cause i wanna be your forever
my life changed dramaticly when you told me we were through it made me feel like i didnt even wanna live anymore so i told myself i gotta change so i searched high n low for a girl like you but there was no hope because nobody could ever replace you
so i wrote a note telling you that i wanted you back and if you came back then i would change i took it and hung it up three days later you walked in my house found my body laying on the floor you looked up and saw the note i wrote you just started crying and o how i wish i could wake up but i was already gone
A friend of mine wrote this Any suggestions on how to make it better???