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a hot night in New Orleans

come in late, the band's already setting  up,

On a hot night in New Orleans,

furniture murmurs along grainy floors,

sounding too heavy to make it off the ground

-the night has that feel-

light hangs ***** in the air.

I could stick around for the show,

but you're upstairs.

 

through the floor - we feel it - we hear it-

those first few notes-erratic-blasting

-a few too sharp, you might wince,

but each note tunes a little tighter,

until they all cut us free.

 

On hot night in New Orleans,

we can only move in music,

my body against your body like a drum,

Bah-dum, bah-dum;

every gasp, a cymbal crash,

interrupted by my tongue,

Tis-ah, tis-ah;

the brass follows in, feeling their way,

Brah-dah-dah, brah-dah-dah,

slightly rough at first,

but then, they find their grasp,

squeezing the keys-pressing hard on the valves-pumping the slide,

Bah-dum-brah--dah-tis-ah-dah;

now the night is alive,

you can feel the strings coming,

Dee-dah-doh-dah-dum-dum;

and we're dancing as nimbly as the keys until the band packs up.

 

On a hot night in New Orleans

we're in love.

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benjamin-woolley
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Oct 1, 2014
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