Over time you became guarded After they brought you down You learned to trust no one Because they made you feel like a clown
So you put up this wall To protect you from the pain Even when putting up this wall Made you feel insane
You found that you need to stay guarded Because no one wants to know What goes on in your life So you put on a show
No one’s life is perfect But no one lets anyone see Just how messed up Their life just may be
Some deal with abuse Though you could never tell Whether physical or emotional They are truly dealing with hell
Others may have lost someone Through divorce or through a death To them it’s like their once perfect life Was taken by a theft
The thing is, we all have problems That we don’t let others see That’s why you can never judge someone No matter how happy they seem to be
Always take into account All the secrets that you keep And that someone else could have secrets too; You aren’t the only one in so deep
No one likes their secrets Or that they cannot tell But they have this sturdy wall That they wish would’ve already fell
Some people are lucky; They have people to break them free Their walls get chipped away Until they can simply just be
This wall is sometimes sacred As it hides people from their pain It acts like a lifesaver That helps them to stay sane
One day people will be able To move away from their wall But until they are strong enough to do so They use their wall to get through it all
A while back, I got a critique on one of my other poems, Nothing to Say, saying that I should describe the wall that I talk about in the end of that poem more, so this is my description of it. I know that this isn't exactly what that person wanted but, I felt like this description and poem was needed to capture all of my feelings about it.
Please leave your feedback. I had a lot of trouble with the ending of this and it would really help to know what everyone thinks.
Thank you for reading and for all of your support. :)