The story of you is a picture to my ears of you being a bit of a pup, wearing headphones to mass, driving the same priest mad who later showed you how to play a bodhran in an empty church.
Imagine the happening of it of you, standing in an empty field looking at a well, wondering hard how the water got to be there or your eyes circling wider in memory of seeing and touching girls yonis for the first time
you'd say “Ah Mam, I don't want to go to Greaney's for shoes” was Mr Greaney's dark and cold with shelves packed thick with damp boxes, white labels marking styles and sizes, N for navy, B for brown, brogues, sensible, that would have all the boys in school laughin at ya, your ma pressin ******* the toes to make sure you've a bit of room to grow into?
you talked to me late at night, of young ones and of passing the seed.
any suggestions to the lay out of this poem will be gratefully received, its driving me mad !!