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these demons

these demons entrance our reckless thoughts

the devil teaching us to dance

one two three four

five six seven eight

our breath and step align,

to ensue impeccable time

we sway between the lucid arms

extended by our captor

a lost count is inevitable,

yet the music will never return

straining for a lone note

with cotton ball eardrums

our steps cannot suffice

the torn shreds of perfection

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Written by
julia-white
American
Published
Jan 2, 2011
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14·68
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alternative title thoughts?

i didn't really know where to go with the title.

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