Hello PoetryVoting

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy poemsNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy poemsNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

A Million Pieces

Finished and done, you've had your fun Now I'm alone, empty to the bone. Before my spirit was dead, I always said, I'd go the distance but now my soul has no resistance to the chains of loneliness and regret. You kept me around, forever bound by you plastic smile you controlled me for more then a short while. To the point that until now that I'd follow your lead even if you asked me to bleed. After all this time I bet you've forgotten everything we did everything I did just for you but I will never and I wish you could remember that even if you crush my heart into a million pieces I'd rebuild it again just so you could break it.
Request permission to use this poem
s
Written by
seb-garcia
Filipino
Published
Dec 31, 2010
Lines·Words
34·125
Notes

Via seb-net!

Hey everyone think you could give me a comment on the rhyming?? It seems a bit forced when I read it and I would really like your constructive opinions. Thanks!! :D

Permission

Request to use this poem

Tell seb-garcia how you would like to use it. We review requests before forwarding them.

AboutBlogFAQPrivacyTermsContact
© 2009-2026 Hello Poetry/v27.0 by @eliotyork
Explore
Hello PoetryVoting
Write