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Chi-town Stream of Consciousness

flying into Chi-town Altoids of various sizes litter the scenery. An artfully constructed playset thrown off by the skilled placement of refreshing breath mints. Maybe they’re off brand, or perhaps ecstasy, though I don’t see any smiley faces or hearts. I like to look for high school tracks as we descend. Forget the football fields, they’re far less interesting. Mostly black, though sometimes gravel, dirt or red and even purple once, though not in Chi-town. The homestretch extending beyond each curve; no hurdles in sight much less a sand pit. A mile inland there is some sort of water. The body scattered and split like some kind of man-made accident. shallow sand banks invisible from the ground look like dead whales. floating (submersed) there like lifeless, sandy corpses. Maybe it’s because of my “Free Willy” spree, but I see whales. I’ve never been to Chicago, only in and out of the airport and catching glimpses of what I can see through the windows of Midway. My good friend has flown with me once, but we parted at the big city. Have you ever wondered why cities are built like mountains? the tallest buildings in the center with everything else leading up to it? Kinda like that Verizon commercial with the magnet and lead… Maybe I’ll Google it to find an answer. There’s a private airport a little closer. (Too good for Southwest to land there). Private jets and runways too classy to have a White Castle across the expressway from it. They have cornfields. Even closer now. The houses larger with matching sheds and identical roves. Almost all have pools, makes sense for a windy city like Chi-town. Some are covered and nasty for the impending winter. Playsets and driveways, minimal trees. I wonder if the children ever get scared when the shadow of a 700 series darkens their windows and slides. If they look up and feel warmth in their Children’s Place pants, throwing their ice cream to the wind and catapulting into the comfort of their father’s arms and then write about it 13 years later after they get off that plane. “Thank you for flying with us today, please come back and see us soon.” A desperate cry for profit
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Dec 14, 2010
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