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when it's redemption we're craving

we love the pieces, shattered and confused. broken and misled, you dreamed of days when you would find the one who could hold you together before they set you apart, just one more time. and we drink down the sadness and eat up the morose, because this world is full of great depressions. a struggling, recovering, hopeless addict for the irredeemable and never again. we chose revenge, when it’s redemption we’re craving. and now this bloody battle takes its honour in the sky as we send thursdays our love and wish upon two stars for the grace we were never given. i may have been a mistake, a mishaps, a worthless outcast. but the colours in your voice told me otherwise, even though the talk in your eyes denied everything. and the trees, they talk, they whisper the things you were too cowardly to admit. so i’ll pretend to fall in love with life once again, until you’re ready to open your eyes up to a different world.
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rachelle-bromley
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Dec 5, 2010
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march 2010.

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