Like her husband, Claire's wineglass left rings on the table. Her coarse hair stuck to her thin, oxblood lips. She found time to breathe in between sips and dry coughs brought on by her friend, John, smoking on the couch. He put his Pall Malls out on the armrest like Dalmatians. Her sister lay in a red wine carpet stain counting the pennies behind John's feet. Claire hid behind a fruit bowl; oranges with skin far tighter than hers. *Oranges her husband would've been glad to ****.
It feels so weird using names in poems because I don't feel like I can ever pick fitting ones. This poem was really spur of the moment. I like a few of the images. What do you think?