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Elaiza Banasig
Poems
Jul 2014
The Legend of the Star that Faded
Once upon a time, I met this star in front of the cross
one morning
while praying
the star caught my attention
I thought it didn't notice me
but every time I pass by this star
every time we're in the same vicinity
It never fails to give a glitter glance at me
and I to it
Many times it's the first one I see
when I open my eyes
after praying
It never failed to bid hello
It never failed to throw a smile
It never failed to give a stare that says it cares
One day I saw my star dancing
with a diamond star
the star he's been dancing with
light years beyond and back
I waited for his caring glance
and still caught it
the diamond star casts a glance at me as well
a glance so sharp my eyes hurt
I had to close them
I tried to close them
tried to not seek his glance for surely I'd be burned again
the diamond star enveloped our sky
our cross
our vicinity
suddenly
my star faded
Written by
Elaiza Banasig
Philippines
(Philippines)
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