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Elaenor Aisling
Poems
Jul 2014
Tin fall
My eyes feel heavy enough
to fall shut
and never open,
eyelids clanging like a tin box lid
with cheap hinges.
My hands feel heavy enough
to fall down
to permanent attention
and never rise,
frozen like the tin soldier
who was lost in the ashes.
My feet feel heavy enough
to fall once more
and never lift again,
bolted, like a tin sign
to a rotting telephone pole.
Written by
Elaenor Aisling
27/F/body in U.S. heart in U.K
(27/F/body in U.S. heart in U.K)
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