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Brick wall

As I grazed my palms against the bricks,

the red-orange crumbled into a soft, dense powder

that reminded me of a manicured bark

from tall, ghastly trees that spread up into the sky

and coated the blue in a darkness, so finite,

as the limbs of surrounding trees connected

and bent and folded into each other in a symmetry

reminiscent of the fingers of a girl and her father

joined together on a late train ride,

the day's activities taking their toll

upon the girl's smattered unrest

and her father's shirt collar in the same proportions

while he stays awake to appreciate the one moment

of quiet with the last living being he cares for.

The cars spoke loudly enough to shake my kneecaps

and stir my mind from its stupor

as I stared back into my palm

and realized the trail of red

I left along the sidewalk.

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