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dead in the water

by @intanamira

i open up my eyes but my vision gets blurry i can hardly breathe your hands let go of me the cold strikes my bone i don't want you to go i'm there in the water still looking for you i'm dead in the water still waiting for you
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intanamira
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Written by
intanamira
20 / F
Published
Jun 20, 2014
Time
1m
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inspired by ellie goulding's song.

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#drown#deadinthewater#elliegoulding
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