drm dor open
drm dor closed
the latter suggests
intertwining toes

rapturous song
from bunk to bunk
twisting embers
young and drunk

unless of course
he does not know
how to move
lacking an O

drm dor open
drm dor closed
the former implies
an ending posed

nope, not it
not even near
still no good
was i not clear?

he left abruptly
he had to go
frustrated i am
he never found the O