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Fishing

He awoke at four that morning with the sunrise.

"Time to go, babe, get ready," he said with a smile,

Thinking I had been asleep, unaware

I lied awake all night, waiting anxiously.

I wondered if he thought it rather strange,

His little girl wanted to deep-sea fish.

 

He hand-made ham sandwiches with cheddar cheese--

(Because he knows that cheddar is my favorite)--

And then forced me to take some dramamine.

"It keeps you from puking your lunch," he teased.

I didn't fuss at him for giving me the **** pills.

I was ready to catch my first Atlantic shark.

 

Florida's early mornings aren't that warm,

So he gave me his old jean jacket as we drove south.

The dock was full of average sailor types--

Our captain's name was Anderson, I think.

Anderson looked just like his boat too,

Weathered by the wicked waves of the ocean.

 

The boat would swerve and I would sway so awkwardly,

Unbalanced like a newborn giraffe.

Dad gripped my shaking shoulders and whooped,

"This one's gonna be a beauty, you can mark my words!"

I snatched, tugged, and reeled violently--!

The beast finally surfaced with the tiniest plash.

 

She wiggled on the hook, to my mild astonishment,

Slippery, slime-covered, and small in size.

"It's a white snapper!" Anderson boomed.

She was sixteen inches and diamond white,

Glistening in the sun like the greatest treasure.

Dad patted me on the back, chest swollen with pride.

 

Catching Atlantic sharks didn't matter now.

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Nov 13, 2010
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Thought about making this prose, but tried it out as a poem instead.

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