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Common Strangers

Strangers,

encircled by a halo of smoke,

stems of nerves ablaze with habit.

I, lungs long filled,

focus on a fledgling:

shaky fingers lift

a stem to parched lips.

The puff, the cough,

the giddy laughter as she holds

smoke captive,

rolls it about in her mouth

only to exhale an opaque cloud.

The nerve-wrecked veteran:

sienna-stained fingers carelessly fling

ashes into an empty soda can.

One stem, two, three...

all burnt to the ****

with just enough fervor

to light the next: chains of valor.

The play-actor: superslims

puffed without purpose.

Tiny manicured fingers hide

the notstem, the habit,

the voidless desire.

The weakling: no will

to purchase the pack,

cowers with her borrowed stem, knows

her next must always be her last,

hopes tomorrow will bring deliverance.

And I, having lived their trials,

accept these strangers,

friends of a common crave.

I set afire my courage

and wave my flag of sweet rebellion:

Satisfied.

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Written by
lori-carlson
American
Published
Nov 11, 2010
Lines·Words
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(c) 1994, Iona Nerissa

All poetry under the names Lori Carlson or Iona Nerissa are the sole property of Lori Carlson.

Please seek permission before using any of my writings.

~Lori Carlson~

Please let it be known that I am no longer a smoker, but I believe this poem is about much more than merely smoking. Your opinions are welcomed.

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