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It is with great sadness

It is with great sadness that I write to inform you *this is madness the smoke is so thick stitched through with tracer fire I can feel it burning the back of my throat, stinging my eyes* That your son has been killed in action *my rifle is bucking in my hands recoiling from the slaughter before me, as I too recoil nothing makes sense anymore* Words can not express the sorrow *everything is slowing down blood kisses the air before me it's- oh god it's my blood I'm falling* You must be feeling at this time *it's so quiet I can't move oh god it's so quiet, why can I still hear the screams?* Know that he did his duty and died for his country *it's so quiet so cold I-*
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Written by
jesse-bourque
Canadian
Published
Nov 8, 2010
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I've always felt that those letters to next of were, no matter how heartfelt, entirely inadequate. They're simply unable to portray the horror of those final moments.

(c) Jesse Bourque

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