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Nov 2010
It is with great sadness that
I write to inform you

this is madness
the smoke is so thick
stitched through with tracer fire
I can feel it burning the back of my throat,
stinging my eyes


That your son has been
killed in action

my rifle is bucking in my hands
recoiling from the slaughter
before me,
as I too recoil
nothing makes sense anymore


Words can not express
the sorrow

everything is slowing down
blood kisses the air before me
it's-
        oh god
it's my blood
I'm falling


You must be feeling
at this time

it's so quiet
I can't move
        oh god
it's so quiet,
why can I still hear the screams?


Know that he did his duty
and died for his country

*it's so quiet
so cold
I-
I've always felt that those letters to next of were, no matter how heartfelt, entirely inadequate. They're simply unable to portray the horror of those final moments.

(c) Jesse Bourque
Jesse Bourque
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