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Nov 2010
when I stare
and think
All I see is your face
for some reason its always raining
and the trees are never moving,
the waters warm
but your dry.
I saw a feather fall the other day
and wondered where the bird was,
the sky was blue that day
I smiled thinking how you would
look floating to the ground,
I heard people are always asleep
when they float,
How do you sleep in the sky?
(Creative input always welcome. Critique, please with honesty tell me what I could improve. I want to learn to become better. Thanks)
Written by
Christian
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