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Kill Your Adverbs

by @turtlepoop

She tells me the story of a conversation she had with her boyfriend She says "I think a baby should have its dad And not just some of the time" And her voice is steady but I can feel her heart rattling in its cage Her lungs rippling with muscle-memory from childhood tears She is painting a picture of a life using colours missing from her own
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