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On me

Lying on the floor Pretending the ceiling didn’t just fall down On me Cause if you were there I would probably have noticed The crack But now it’s empty Like the egg-formed ball On me So if this was surreal And that other time was reality I wouldn’t sleep alone And I’m pretending The ceiling didn’t fall down On me Justify my oddity Counterbalance this reality And let me sleep alone Don’t try to save what’s already lost When the ceiling falls down On me The red bricks And the eternal sound of rush hour outside Reminds me that it’s better in here In this world of subconscious confusion Where nothing seems to be alright I see you On me “Don’t”, I say Knowing that this will take me where I want to go But still knowing it won’t Contemplating the thought of standing up But there’s blocked, the ceiling is resting On me “Strength”, you say And save me by removing the ceiling With just one hand “What is all this about?” I ask myself, and the poem stops with just one line to be written
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Oct 31, 2010
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