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Suicide

I stumbled upon a thought of you and I walked right past I turned around ignoring the warning I heard someone yell At the top of my lungs I screamed your name But you cold-heartedly walked away And I was left there on my own Without your warmth; I froze Every breath cracked my lungs Every pound scarred my heart Every minute pierced my soul, unleashing it And every blink opened up my eye, truly For once I could see Without the help of any vision enhancing tool But the pure vision one is born with, unveiled A revolution capable of monumentally alternating a belief A reinvention of what it has been and what it should be For it should be what I want it to A warm gust came over me I turned once again and was astonished to see the image I saw It was you, your warmth engulfing your flesh, your soul And there I was just a breeze of cool air Capable of saving you from yourself But listening this time, I walked away.
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Oct 29, 2010
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