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The Joke

In our eighth year as friends, we reached

a little further

between sheets,

bleached white and starched, in

the contrived ambiance

of a hotel room.

 

More cautious than nervous, we peeled

to bare flesh

and proceeded

slowly, carefully, as though

we might break our

well-seasoned past with

our fresh exploration.

 

Both of us knew what

we each always wanted—

youthful tensions,

now matured into

full-scale desire—

and pursued it,

dismissing our prior reserve

as unfounded.

 

Our hands,

warm beneath

cotton and denim,

explored contours, sought

softness

with increasing confidence.

 

As trepidations

diffused into

a scene of

two old friends, now

new young lovers,

she paused

at a joke made

in sharp contrast

to our actions.

 

We waited,

long enough to

inhale and

share a glance before

we both collapsed

in laughter.

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Written by
ethan-taylor
American
Published
Oct 29, 2010
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I spent a lot of time on this piece. I am fairly pleased with the result.

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