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LACS
Poems
Oct 2010
Don't you love me?
Supplicate my need
perspiration collects & I follow.
Desire me,
a lack of understanding ensues.
Consider my will
winds howl, caught & I follow.
Find me,
a certainty of all of the unaware.
Placate my lust
smoke pervades & I follow.
Love me,
please
cause I don't see tomorrow.
& This is what I ask
This is my need
This is my will
You concede to familiarity
& live your life day to day
Taking me by night
Trading a constant for encompassing days
You are okay
& That is what you ask
That is your need
That is your will
But take my nights,
please
I do not reproach you them
Take everything I can give
& all that I cannot
But
promise me, please
that once you will pander my need
to be happy
Critique is welcome, I wrote this much too late in the evening and I am curious for opinions.
Copyright, for use with permission only.
Thank you.
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LACS
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