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Flawed Luna

Would you believe me

If I said

That the moon was afraid

And wanted to hide her flaws?

While we lay here

With our telescopes and astronauts,

She tried her best

To cover herself with clouds

So we

Don’t notice

And

Can’t see

Her craters

Which she calls “blemishes,”

But we call “freckles.”

Perhaps,

One day the moon will see her beauty

Reflecting back at her

In a once dark lake

Now illuminated with light.

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ashlyn-kriegel
American
Published
Apr 29, 2014
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