Hello PoetryVoting

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy poemsNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy poemsNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

Death Wish

~In a downward state of mind

 

Why is it?

My house,

up there,

I, so carefully put together,

brick by brick

out of mist, sea air,

out of nothing

really;

glued by my desire

to live,

is ruined.

 

Now,

all come

crashing down,

shattered;

brick by brick,

boulder by boulder,

stone by stone.

 

Down through

stratosphere;

the speed

with which

hot

burning,

ashes and debris

blind my eyes,

unbearable pain

in my broken bones,

my flesh burnt;

earth is shaking

under my feet,

I'm losing balance.

 

I am closing my eyes,

plugging my ears,

not to hear

the dreadful thunder.

 

I wish,

I hope,

one of these nights,

while sleeping,

I will stop dreaming,

I will cease

to breathe.

Request permission to use this poem
m
Written by
milushka
Published
Oct 14, 2010
Lines·Words
44·119
Notes

~This is not my Poem; this belongs to me Lamushkia; (Milushka) who is no longer with us.

Check out her other poems in her collection here.

She deserves to be remembered.

~Anna

~          ~          ~          ~          ~          ~

Prior Reviews:

Galman Frederick Ferguson   Oct. 12th

this is one of the good poignant poems i've ever read!!!!!!! Exqusite!!!!!

Permission

Request to use this poem

Tell milushka how you would like to use it. We review requests before forwarding them.

AboutBlogFAQPrivacyTermsContact
© 2009-2026 Hello Poetry/v27.0 by @eliotyork
Explore
Hello PoetryVoting
Write