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Platform

Sometimes I find myself on a train platform

not intending to go anyplace at all, but there

all the same, just because I need someplace

to think, alone, but surrounded by others.

 

I hate the smell of it, unless I am within

perfume scent distance of a beautiful girl.

But the sounds, the sounds are otherworldly.

The sound of cold steel thunder approaching.

 

Sometimes when trains approach from both sides,

I feel the earth shake, and I close my eyes imagining,

what the lightning would feel like.

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Oct 11, 2010
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