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Mar 2014
I’ll listen to what you’ve written
but not recreate

I’ll do-it-myself, let pages
sip on my letters

let every vowel stand out
as skyscraper lights.

When I sink to sleep
I’ll lock my dreams

in a wooden chest
retrieve them

when morning strolls in
fetch the fresh post.

I wonder if there is such a thing
as drowning beautifully

I want to consume you
like that ocean water

make what I have said
gush into your eyes.
Written: March 2014.
Explanation: A poem written in my own time NOT while drunk (as the title may suggest.) 'Drunk' is meant in a positive sense, like becoming drunk on good music or literature, not the somewhat unpleasant 'drunk' of consuming too much wine and vomiting in the street.
Feedback very much welcome, as always.
Reece AJ Chambers
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Reece AJ Chambers  31/M/Northamptonshire, England
(31/M/Northamptonshire, England)   
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