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crave the Briar Thornly, discard the rose petals unless...(read the young poets)

by @nat-lipstadt

between poems, an old curmudgeon, am me-he, thorny gray stubbled face available for knife sharpening and tongue lashing cranky and cantankerous, bad tempered, ill mannered, me-he, until they slip me a paper aspirin place before me a clean sheet Presto Chango, the ole man displaced, (the boy who remembers to forget,) in his heart~place, installed, though the briar and the thorn never from his visage depart, just briefly, Red Sea parted kiss me surprised, stumbling about in the wee of the rambunctious hours, stubbing me eyes upon a poetess, a kindred soul who claims my pointy moniker that earned I, only after years of indentured servitude, Briar Thornly, so unnaturally misnamed, yet she of but, few and the tenderest years rights me up with young words her poems sweet treats, sweet eats, departing me delightfully unfairly from my grumpy good graces, look below if you dare risking, a hazardous glancing upon her works, if you like to, grrrrr, smile *Déjà vu Oh to write or not to write. My mind says I don't have a choice. Love has made a home in my heart. I suffer not being able to open the door to my inspiration. I toss a paper ball into the trash. Chapters of my life turn into dust. I bury those words in my mind. Words that I used to think were wrapped up in true meaning. A break could kill my block but my pencil spins out of control. I'll conquer all of those lost attempts. Piano's and violins phase in and out. Wheels of creativity turning in caution. The clock sounds gong,gong,gone. Inspiration died at the start of a vacation. On the page there was the suicide of passion. The ghost of my muse will soon reappear. My emotions need to break free from the shelter of my imagination. I"ll write till the dawn of poetry.^* read her poetry till dawn or face my thorny faced muse, and perhaps now you understand, at last comprehend, **a rose by any other name would smell as sweet as a thorn**
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nat-lipstadt
99 / M / NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
For You?
Written by
nat-lipstadt
99 / M / NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
Published
Mar 18, 2014
Time
4m
Notes

Read her.  Please.  

http://hellopoetry.com/briar-thornly/

One of many done, and plenty yet to come, in my "read the young poets" series.  The list is long....

^ http://hellopoetry.com/poem/612091/deja-vu/

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