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Mar 2014
I tried to do everything my way, only to collapse in desperation.
Then I rose, because only then did I allow you to take control.
A desperate man with a desperate plea, I fell at the bottom of the cross.
Only when I let you take control, did my life change for the best.
Your beauty oh Lord, reveal to me your perfect will for me.
Is to love others, the same very way that you have love me.
Only when we become desperate, only then will our live change.
Because only then shall we allow you to take complete control.
Eddie Starr
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Eddie Starr  Hagerstown Md
(Hagerstown Md)   
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