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Logical Analysis*

House. Blizzard.

Three three three

friends.

Three friends.

That’s what’s in the house.

Electric

heater. An electric heater.

That’s what they huddle around.

A person. Matt.

A person. Still Matt.

A person Ryan.

Two persons.

Three friends.

Me. I’m there.

Me. God, free-will.

They’re there.

Hard determinism?

God. That is what’s said.

Blizzarded on. Nothing tomorrow.

Talk on three friends. Logical.

We cement ourselves in.

There is more than us in the room.

That’s the conclusion. Logical conclusion.

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Written by
tommy-n
American
Published
Oct 2, 2010
Lines·Words
23·78
Notes

*After Raymond Queneau's "Exercises in Style"

Written as an exercise for the MFA program at Columbia College Chicago (Part of the "Mastertape" project)

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