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Pantoum of Promises.

You promised you'd be there.

You said, and you swore.

and though I'm not bitter,

my heart's still sore.

 

You said, and you swore

as you walked away,

my heart's still sore

yet I'll live out the day.

 

As you walked away,

and though I'm not bitter,

yet I'll live out the day

you promised you'd be there.

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kath-otoole
English
Published
Oct 2, 2010
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(c) kath otoole - 02/10/2010.

A Pantoum obeying the original Malaysian formatting.

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