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A Love Contradiction

by @everett

On a cold Winter's day a plume of white smoke could be seen from far away. Not the smoke from a chimney or a cigarette lit, this was a plume of heavy breathing from two lovers having a fit. Snow capped trees surround them as they argue, neither wants to leave without first saying, "I love you." She pulls on the tips of her long black hair, standing in the middle of a forest, unbeknownst to how she got there. He fiddles with the lighter in his pocket, wondering if leaving her would be worth it. Although it may not seem like it, these two have made love, found love, and are in love. The plume of heavy breathing will subside like the flame between them now and turn into an ember burning long and bright, as long as each one of them has the courage to say what's right.
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22 / M / American
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Written by
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22 / M / American
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Feb 13, 2014
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