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Jan 2014
I remember
The first time I told you that I loved you
We spent the whole day together
And I was so tired
And you walked me to my car
I sat sideways in the front seat, door open, facing you
And we kissed
And just as you were about to close the door
I said it
It took all that I had
It felt like I had breathed my last breath
I was so nervous
I wanted to explode
And the two seconds between the time when I said it and when you said it back
Was the most agonizing time of my life
And when I drove away
I cried
I cried out of pure joy and love for you
And that was the best day of my life
Melissa Calopiz
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Melissa Calopiz  San Francisco
(San Francisco)   
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