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by jessica-wong

It should not be possible for my heart to beat its fastest when it feels as though everything else around me has stopped. A shot to Achilles' heel is an understatement to the way you, only you, can make me feel. Can someone tell me, since when did receiving a smile, feel like being cast out into S P A C E ? because I feel as if I'm floating and the world is just so, so much more beautiful. and even though I cannot breathe, I want to watch the sunrises and the sunsets and sit through the storms and the cloudy days and the twinkling city lights at night. Excuse me doctor, what do I do? When it is legal to drown these feelings in alcohol but illegal to drive myself home, I feel lost. I fear I'm drowning in my love for you
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For You?
Written by
jessica-wong
American
Published
Dec 29, 2013
Time
2m
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I know this needs tons of revision, so could you people help me out? Thanks so much

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